Provides transitions which clearly serve to connect ideas Includes sentences, or phrases where appropriate, of varied length and structure
3
Provides adequate transitions in an attempt to connect ideas Includes sentences, or phrases where appropriate, that are somewhat varied in length and structure
2
Provides transitions which are weak or inconsistent Shows limited variety in sentence length and structure
1
Provides transitions which are poorly utilized, or fails to provide transitions Has little or no variety in sentence length and structure
Voice- cares about topic & reader (avoid being routine, predictable, lifeless, or bored with your own essay)
4
Allows the reader to sense the person behind the words
3
Provides the reader with some sense of the person behind the words
2
Attempts somewhat to give the reader a sense of the person behind the words
1
Provides the reader with little sense of the person behind the words
Ideas & Content – focus on main idea & provide strong supporting details
Organization –strong introduction, conclusion, concluding sentences for each paragraph, & sequence
Word Choice- colorful, vivid, specific words, strong images (avoid ordinary, vague, colorless wording)
Sentence Fluency- transitions, variety of sentence lengths, sentence flow (avoid awkward wording)
Includes sentences, or phrases where appropriate, of varied length and structure
Includes sentences, or phrases where appropriate, that are somewhat varied in length and structure
Shows limited variety in sentence length and structure
Has little or no variety in sentence length and structure
Voice- cares about topic & reader (avoid being routine, predictable, lifeless, or bored with your own essay)
Visual Aids & Body Language